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Looking into the water REVAMP by KokoKiero Looking into the water REVAMP by KokoKiero
This is for the So I herd u liek progress? contest. The news article can for it can be found here.

This is a revamp of the very first picture that I ever uploaded to DeviantART. It was fun to redo, and awesome to see how much better I did the second time around.

Any comments on how I can improve my backgrounds would be greatly appreciated, this one looks so sparse... Specific critique on the water, grass, trees, sky, etc. are all very welcome!
And of course, any comments on how I can improve anything else is also welcome. :3
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jalorda101 Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Great job. I love the effects of how you drew the water. Great job. keep up the great work.
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KokoKiero Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Why thank you! I've been trying to do some different things with backgrounds, so I'm glad you like the water effects. :)
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jalorda101 Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
:D :D :)
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rayquaza128 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
wow, that looks incredible! quilava looks so adorable X3
great work and good luck in the contest :D
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KokoKiero Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
Thank you so much! :hug:
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rayquaza128 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
you're welcome :huggle:
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xMIndaTaia Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
EPIC I hope you win the contest. The only think I can think of is depinding on if you wanted round ground grass area that you have (Which I love) or if you wannted the grass to be fluffy you could add diferint shades of green lines to look like grass. But that dempnds on what your going for. I love this pictur so much great job :la:
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KokoKiero Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
Thank you very much! :aww: I was trying to use some different shades of green without going overboard crazy, and I guess I should've put some more in after all. If I do a revamp of this revamp, I'll make sure to do so!
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xMIndaTaia Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol I love the pic and I only heve 1 last bit of advice. Overboard is never a bad thing when it comes to expressing yourself ;)
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